Hot sexual tension between both of the characters which I enjoyed the most I also enjoyed the type of devotion that Jared has with Alex which is something you don t see too often.
When Billionaire College Freshman, Jared Paterski, Moves To The University Of Minnesota Twin Cities And Meets His New Roommate, Alexander Schmidt, He Is Mesmerized By His Characteristics He Finds Everything About Him Including His Personal Hobbies, Personality, And His Sexiness To Be Perfect Which Drives Him To Copy Him In Order To Live His Life Like His With All The Money He Has, He Spoils Alex With Luxurious Gifts And Treats Him Like A King As Soon As He Knows Him Some , He Brings Him Into His Special Dungeon, Showing Him His Dark Side, Casting Away His Innocence The first thing I need to say is that this book is different than the average romance novel,well, kinda Steaminess 4.
5 Stars Attractiveness 4 Stars Quality of writing 3 Stars Overall story 4 Stars Final rating 4 Stars This is an amazing read that I m glad my best friend told me about Reading through it made me so tensed up for what was going to happen next I always had the thoughts of OMG is Alex going to leave him or How could he not know Jared was deeply into him from the beginning going through my mind One thing that struck me is how stinking rich Jared is I mean, how and why is one a college student if they re a billionaire But on the other side, the way Jared is devoted to his boyfriend Alex is so hot in many different ways, and when he took him to his secret dungeon to dominate him, I blushed so muchOk, the sex scenes were very hot, enough to make me squirm while reading them.
To sum up the characters, Jared Paterski reminds me a lot of Christian Grey from Fifty Shades of Grey by E L James and Alex Schmidt having a similar resemblance to Jamie from Him by Sarina Bowen.
If you didn t feel like reading my review and want a summary, here you go read it if you want a book filled with manly sexiness and plenty of bondage and domination.
I want this to start off by saying that my intention isn t to hurt you, try to upset you, or troll you I made an account on this site because I read a few chapters of your book and I couldn t read any You tend to use the same phrases over and over the one off the top of my head is inner sexual desires sprinkled 3 4 times each chapter A little variety would go a long way The flow of the sexual encounters is also really weird It isn t very natural, and this readsas like a high school fanfiction than a novel The whole aspect of having Jared copy Alexander s interests and everything to be like him is kind of unsettling if you were to think about this from a real life perspective Unless your intention is to make Jared seem like a stalker, this really makes everything seem weird For what I assume to be your first time writing a book, it isn t horrible But there s definitely a lot to edit and tweak Best of luck in your future writing endeavors EnjoyedI didn t start off liking this book about two college roommates, Jared the billionaire and Alex, the jock It s very plainly written and it gets to the point rather quickly with mostly very short and non descriptive sentences But then to my shock and amazement something happened I m not sure at what point in the book it happened but I started caring for the 2 MCs, Jared and Alex Jared s immediate love for Alex seemed hokey with his over abundant usage of the phrase my inner sexual desires written with great abundance throughout the book And Alex who had never been with another male before seemed very knowledgeable in how to reciprocate Alex s inner sexual desires, if you know what I mean But it all worked somehow in all it s quirkiness and I started missing the aforementioned phrase when it wasn t mentioned on each page, lol In fact I enjoyed it so much that before I was finished I immediately 1 clicked the follow up book I m so glad I did because there was a twist that I wasn t expecting at the end, I gotta know what happens 4.
5 StarsI really enjoyed this book a lot It might not be every ones cup of tea as it is sexually explicit male male, but it s a nice light read The two characters and their attraction for one another quickly got me into the story I cannot wait to read the other stories as well as the ones in Alex s point of view.
This book was a lot better than I thought it would be This story involves two college students and roommates Jared P and Alexander S As soon as Jared meets Alex, it becomes love at first sight He is so attracted to him that he has the desire to imitate Alex in almost every way possible At first I wasnt too sure how I felt about that but I was slowly drawn into the story deeper as I kept reading about it He then buys him various gifts and luxuries Later on, he brings him into his sex life involving various BDSM elements combines with vanilla elements as well.
Overall, I really enjoyed this story a lotthan I thought and it s something I will be rereading again and again in the future.
So this story is about two college students Jared Pasterski, and Alexander Schmidt who likes to go by Alex Jared is attracted to Alex in every way possible He likes everything about him and decides to live like him He is insanely rich and spoils him with various items and gifts In the midst of all this, he brings him into what he calls his dungeon which is filled with various sex toys and BDSM equipment In the dungeon, he enlightens him by well you get the picture Overall rating 5 Stars A great friend of mine who really enjoys M M erotic romance recommended this book to me to check it Oh my god I m glad I bought this My first reaction was,who would fall in love with their roommate like thatBut then I truly felt the chemistry between both of the characters, I could almost feel how Jared feels about Alex through B Q s writing Now to the sex, oh boy this is going to get fun There was a lot of hot sex in this book I especially enjoyed the tension before and leading up to the first sex scene where Jared first introduces Alex to not only sex he s a virgin but to the BDSM culture Not going to lie, I was expecting him to run away or freak out when he told him he wants to have sex with him, while he was shocked at first who wouldn t be he did go along with it and ending up enjoying it All of the sex scenes in this novel I felt were very tasteful and sexy The way Jared treats Alex and devotes his life to him amazed me The storyOverall, I really enjoyed this novel and it s sexual aspects It sthan just erotica, it has a nice romantic story to it I would highly recommend giving it a read
The only thing thats preventing me from giving this five stars is the over use of the terms oh my and Jared referring to his inner sexual desires Ok, I get it, Jared is a horny man just like many other college men but there could have been better ways to describe it.
Now to get to my final thoughts, I would recommend this book for anybody looking for a fun fast read It s sexy and unique.